I released my fourth novel, Class Act, at the beginning of June and to say the going has been slow is an understatement. I have struggled to even give the book away. When I ran a free promotion the numbers were a quarter of those for Baby Blues & Wedding Shoes. I put it down to having no reviews and didn’t panic.
But now, with a couple of good reviews (and a couple not so good!) I am running a Giveaway on Goodreads and still getting a fraction of entries compared with the Baby Blues Giveaway. I’ve decided that the cover and blurb must be failing me.
I’m not surprised. I mocked the cover up last year, when I decided on a new name for the novel (it’s working title was The Real Gentleman, as the novel was written as a modern day Georgette Heyer style romance) and I do like the design, especially the bold red paperback. Unfortunately the current cover doesn’t give anything away as to genre, all it does is explain the ‘act’ part of the play-on-words title.
So I’ve spent this week, in between making loomband pets and ignoring the children, looking at images on my favourite site istockphoto to find something more in the woman’s fiction/romance genre. I know that half-naked bodies is what the genre seems to dictate, but that really isn’t me. Besides, the novel isn’t at all raunchy, and I don’t want to set a false expectation.
When I designed the cover for Baby Blues I used the books of Joanne Harris as my inspiration. Her pastel covers are lovely and she is an author that I admire greatly. It also gave me a style that fit within my capabilities using Adobe Photoshop, as I don’t know any cover designers and my experience of hiring freelancers as an author hasn’t always been successful.
As I couldn’t find any images relating to the theatre and acting, I decided to focus on the two other ‘themes’ that I feel run through the novel: art and daisies. These are the covers I came up with (I only had an hour before little lady got bored, so I know the font doesn’t stand out well on some of them).
As an aside, these are all based on composites from istockphoto and I haven’t purchased the rights to use them yet, as they’re only mock ups. I will purchase the final image once I’ve made a decision.
So, do any of these stand out? And, for those of you who have read the novel, do any of these fit within your experience of the story? Do these set the right genre? I feel they’re all much more in keeping with Baby Blues (although I have had at least one reviewer say the title and cover put them off that novel! I guess it’s difficult to win without a big budget marketing department to do customer research!)
Once I have some feedback I hope to make the change and extend the giveaway, so hopefully I’ll see immediately if it makes a difference!
My favourite is the last one (bottom right) and I also like the second (top middle) one, but the text would need to be a bit bolder as it gets a little lost otherwise. I’m not a fan of the first one or the one beneath it. Congratulations on releasing a FOURTH novel!
I also like the bottom right pic but I have not read all of the novel yet. I agree with you Joanne Harris’s covers are beautiful.
I like the bottom right.
I’m also curious about what the current cover looks like. I tried to pull it up in goodreads but it’s hard to see. Congrats on your book.
The current cover is on the right hand side of the blog at the top (the red one). I made the mistake of putting the full paperback cover on Goodreads and now I can’t change it!
Okay. Duh! Sorry I didn’t check further before asking. 🙂 I’ll blame it on the fact that I’m off caffeine.
I can’t even contemplate being off caffeine! You’re forgiven anything!
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I love the last cover, with the brushes. 😉
I did too but felt the other one was more commercial… Time will tell
Yeh, agreed. I think from the point of view of visual clues and reader expectations, you’re right. 😉
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